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Just another pose I was thinking about for the figure. I don't know though.
Something bugs me about this drawing... I think it's his right leg (his right, to our left). I couldn't quite get the angle right. And something else about his torso bugs me too but I don't know what. xD Any crits would be helpful. As long as you're not like attacking me or something haha. edit: I just realized I forgot to draw the rest of the straps on his arm armour... and to indicate the end of his gloves lol! oh well. It's just a sketch. Comments wow, awesome poooose ! *_*
i think his right leg is too small, but it's okay : D -- Check my gallery or DIE !  ~bishie-stalker-club  Very nice, how about a spinning round house kick, those are good and actiony!
  Look out! It's Massy's infamous flying kick! D8 *ducks to some shrubs and torny bushes*
Critique? Hmmmm...............................none from moi. Though his left arm (the one facing down) seems a tad strange (for the lack of a better word), unless he's holding onto something to support his jump-and-kick moves O.o; It's kinda refreshening to see ol' Massy back in his old outfits. How many years has it been now since I last see him in it?  -- "Doesn't matter who they are, I'll fuckin' kill 'em all" ~Grimmjow ---- "Sarcasm is my body's natural defense against stupidity." ---- "Sarcasm (n.) : The gulf between the author of sarcastic wit, and the person who doesn't get it."  Wow very cool! I love the claws!
 For a figurine, I wouldn't have him looking at the 'camera'. Instead, I would have it be a mugshot, where he's looking straight ahead, towards the right side of the image, and the outstretched left arm might look better if he'd just got done with slashing in that direction...so, the fingers more splayed and clawlike.
I hope this helps! I love the position of his braid, though. Dunno why, just do! XD -- Human beings can always be relied on to assert, with vigor, their given right to be stupid.  i'm just jealous you can draw poses that cool
-- The trouble with life is that there's no background music.  The thing that bugs me the most is that he is looking at you and it looks like he's leaping from somewhere and his head should be facing in the direction he's intending to go. I don't thing there's anything wrong with the right leg, but the right foot, it seems like you should be seeing it more from the side but it's going more towards a frontal view while the leg is more to the side. His right arm also seems to be a bit longer than the other, unless the left arm is supposed to be going back in space, however it doesn't seem like it. His tail also seems a little thinner than you usually draw it. This all I can see and I hope it helps!
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 To me, the position of the right leg is a little cluttered. The action is so smooth, and then there's discord in that one area. It's looks kind of tense, when the rest of him is open.
Also, just a pet peeve of mine, but the top edge of his big right talon blends with the line of his thigh, and that toe fits right against his other calf. I think it would help if his right leg overlapped the left, so it really does look to be the one in front. You have great skill.  And you're improving all the time. hmm.. I think you forgot the armor on his tail? oh well I like it xD
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