L's haed seems a little big compared to Light's, if that's any help at all ^-^"

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Yeah...His overall head size seems rather large when compared to Light's.Plus I thought L was shorter? You could also try positioning L's head lower on Light's shoulder.

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I think L's head looks good O:
Wish I could help... but really.. it looks fine to me xD;
can't wait to see it done :3

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Hm, maybe you should move the head more inward. From where the angle is right now, his head looks bigger than it is. Try to shadow underneathe of neck more to define his head more. I hope that helps.

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Well...just from what I first saw, I thought that L's mouth looked a little odd. It almost looks like the corner of his mouth is pointing to the corner of his eye. Maybe instead of pointing to his eye, you could have the point of his mouth aim toward his ear or something >.> even though his ear is hidden.

But that's just what I saw. It's your artwork, and I think it looks great so far ;D! I agree with the other comments too. L's head seems a little big, but those are the only things I could spot.

Good luck with it! I'm sure it'll turn out great ^^!

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You also gotta remember L's spiky hair

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I think kittybabe is right on this one. A little bit of it is the hair, but L's head -does- look a bit oversized compared to Light.

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Make Light's eyes a tad bit bigger, right now they make him look feminine which might be what is throwing off the look, his left eye looks a litte to tilted too. L's head does looks big but I think it's his hair, idk I hope I helped.

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It's a lot better than anything I could do, so I really can't assist, but I really hope you're able to finish it. It looks wonderful.

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I have the same problem with that pose. The problem is that the forehead is too far back, which is bringing the eye back, making it look like he has more of a muzzle than a nose and mouth area. Bring the eye and forehead forward (easy way to do it is the liquify tool, I think it's image>liquify, or edit>liquify).

Also, the hands are just a little big; the human hand is typically as long as the face.

I hope this helps!

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